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Independence Day

Majestic is the venue,
as the oboe cries aloud
With a reverberating chorus,
hidden meekly in a shroud

Whispering bassoons,
begin to wail the battle call
As the strings sing sad laments,
for combatants as they fall

Whipped into a frenzy,
the percussion marches in
Destroying unstable front lines,
now the battle does begin

Crashing are the cymbals,
when each cannon starts to fire
Now charge the mounted cavalry,
horns from France seem to inspire

In crescendo is the orchestra,
every instrument ablaze
All at once an eerie quiet,
triangles ringing through the haze

With a final push of fury,
as sound saturates the sky
Every soldier drenched in gratitude,
for their victory in July


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Prompt: Concert

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  • Danna Hobart
    March 2
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    Lovely. Thank you for entering.


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    February 5
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    The 1812 Overture. right? This is beautifully written. Love the final verse especially.