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Caged

Canary sings,
her lonely song,
watching other
birds float and
swoop...

Dreaming of
freedom,
she spreads
clipped wings,
and chirps...
"why?"

A contest entry

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  • Little-Buster gold member
    February 6
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    Wow.
    This is actually a very powerful poem..
    good write!

    -Buster

  • This poem really reminds me of a friend. (I guess only I would get it) It's really lovely and well written, and a great take on the prompt. Thank you so much for entering, and good luck!

    -Sadien

  • awww this is so sad. but really good