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Can't Take This

It's frustrating, I can't take this
Sometimes it feel we're destined for disaster
Moderation's so hard to take in
It's harder to find the life that we've been after

It took me so long to get
My life out of that state
That I could hardly take
You made me a nervous wreck
Now, I'm afraid...

Forget it, I don't get it
Sometimes I feel there might not be an answer
So, bury me with my memories
In this house with petrol and a lighter

It took me so long to get
My life out of that state
That I could hardly take
You made me a nervous wreck
Now, I'm afraid...

But I'm okay...

It's frustrating, I can't take this
Sometimes I feel we're falling ever faster
So, bury me with my enemies
In this house with petrol and a lighter

It took me so long to get
My life out of that state
That I could hardly take
You made me a nervous wreck
Now, I'm afraid...

It took me so long to get
My life out of that state
That I could hardly take
You made me a nervous wreck
But I'm okay...

Author notes

This one is about getting over all of lifes disappointments.

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  • pretty amazin'

    the only thing i don't like about this poem is the forced feel about the first 2 lines of the chorus. other than that tho, good poem. i absolutely love when you change the last line of the chorus tho, that added a lot to it.

  • well in my past
    i could so relate to this
    i hope things if havent already get better for you
    but it was really good
    i enjoyed reading it
    thankyou for entering this
    good luck
    xXalyXx
    his emo teddybear