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Our Kingdom

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I, your fair lady, shall kneel at your feet,
To bring among you a heart that is pure,
The royalty of your kingdom filled with love,
Surrounding us with the desires we so feel,
A mystical passion has rised between us,
Leaving us breathless within our minds,
My kind sir, I give all of me unto you,
In hopes that the fury's of fate will allow us,
To play out this destiny that has brought us together,
Allow me to see upon your heart,
The love that you wish to receive,
So I, your fair lady, can fulfill all that you desire,
For you have captured mine, it is now yours,
Lets rule this kingdom together,
To get lost in our own realm of sweet love.

© June 18, 2001

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  • Draig aine gold member
    February 13
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    very excellent write-strong

    I like this very much

  • A-muse-in-writer
    February 5

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    wow ... that is so beautiful and sweet, almost like it shouldn't be seen by anyone other than the two described. I love romance and this one is something that really sings to me. Sighs. Lost in the thoughts of it now, how wonderful an offer that is portrayed in this one. this is brilliant! Thanks for sharing.


    • Mistress Leala silver member
      February 6
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      Funny, I felt the same way. Thanks for your wonderful comments. You are so sweet.

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