You can’t stand it anymore
And it’s just as bad as before
All the tears and all the lies
You can’t even find hope in the sky
The waves crash upon your back
You can’t stop the attack
You think you will lose
You need a rescue
Look to me, look to me
I’ll show you the way
Look to me, look to me
I will help you today
Look to me, look to me
I’ll never give-up on you
Can’ you see, can’t you see
I am here to help you
Strength you will gain
I’ll take away your pain
I’ll wipe the tears from you eyes
I’ll teach you to look to the sky
Your storm I will fight
I’ll give you light
And when you find your way
I’ll leave before you can say
I love you
Author notes
Just something I wrote last year(2007)...
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Comments
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this is really good i love how you did this, it was very simple but the meaning complex,
keep it up! critisism would be i can barely read it because the font color but that has nothing to do with good poetry! anyways this was lovely.
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Dang. I like it. It has a simple quality that belies real elegance. Once more, bravo, Park.
Hoo-ah,
Shrimp
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I Really like this ... Keep it up
XXDeaths-GirlXX
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