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Thinking of you

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a crisp black night extends
soft and cold

touched and soothed by february dew
arena sparkles in the glow of moon

cotton vapors rise slowly
from the shiny mug of black caffeine

by the unending stairs
in dull yellow light of street lamp

I'm still awake
thinking of you!

-Neha
5th Feb 09


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  • mina nagi gold member
    February 21

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    Aaaaaw this is sooooo sweet.... beautifully penned... I enjoyed every sip of it...

    mina

  • ImNotTheAnswer
    February 5

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    I really enjoyed this, it was such a sweet write. I loved the first 2 lines, they were amazing.

    .xo