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gap


dark gap
i still can see the jacarandas
you haven't shut me out enough
don't give me the pleasure of beauty
don't give me the pleasure of knowing the story

i haven't seen your light, though
either

i haven't seen a thing yet
really

the city kids know better
and they always have
it's different out here, they have different faces
i wonder if they see the gap that's reaching from
every coast

i wonder if they know
why every one is going home yet i
am standing here

tell me
what is distance but the absence of where
you should have been

i thought so
i knew it
i felt it

the gap

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  • raw love
    February 5

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    hhhhhhhmmmmmm
    I really have no clue what this is talking about.
    But I simply like the word picture it paints in my head.
    deep blues greens and blacks... the gap...
    hhhhhhhhmmmmmm I like it.


  • autarky
    February 5
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    me too

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    February 5
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