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General Relativity

Dissolving hypothesis
    escapes time…

A contest entry

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  • cgirl0410 silver member
    February 23

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    Wow, this piece is short but it makes you think so much. Makes one wonder what your thought process was when you penned these two lines. And makes one think of what it means to them. Very powerful piece. Great write. - cgirl0410


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    February 9
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    makes the mind think quite a bit


  • Lady Michaella
    February 6

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    ooo! this is really good, very interesting and unique. fantastic work here!

    best of luck in the contest!! I'm sure you;ll do great!
    -Lemon Bee-
    xx


  • Luciferschild
    February 5
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    interesting...