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Wanda

 

 

                                       

 

 

                                                          

 

 

 

 

she sends me pictures

goddesses, flirty queens, all silken beneath cotton

 

the fabrics are like daisied skin, the hands

as though awaiting to glide my lips

and invite my moistures

 

all from the masters of musical air

flowered

 

and of all these she is I am, and that she loves me

I shall weave her a silken charm of flesh of braids of pale flute notes 

rising

 

as my jealous flute lays, eyeless, steaming 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

                                          

Author notes

to my ... Swan



all digital photoart by Moqui Takoda


critical remarks, permission only ... rhymed gerunds on purpose .... no likey? too bady!

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  • Allyce May gold member
    July 26

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    I love your author's notes! So, not only do you write fabulous poetry, but you make me chuckle

    This is just, unreal. The first five lines in particular just made me stop and gape in awe. Actually, gape doesn't seem like the appropriate word to use given the content of this poem I feel like I have sullied it

    Pure gorgeousness and then some


  • Sonja
    February 6

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    Your digital photo art reminds of Van Gogh's paintings of nests and your poetry softly lands with a charm of soft silk...
    ~Sonja~


  • Night Hope gold member
    February 5

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    "and of all these she is I am, and that she loves me
    I shall weave her a silken charm of flesh of braids of pale flute notes
    rising"


    Sighhh...How I love you, Professor. You write such Beauty upon my Soul so freely, with such eagerness...& on a daily basis, too.THEN, you read them to me on the phone!!! How very fortunate can one girl be??? I dunno...but I'm willing to "stretch the envelope" & find out, m'Darling. It's so wonderful...as are YOU.

     

     


  • BeThouMyVision
    February 5

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    I love how you can be sensual in not such a blunt way but a sweet and poetic. It's beautiful. I really do love your new writes. =] They keep my up waiting for more.

    "the fabrics are like daisied skin, the hands

    as though awaiting to glide my lips

    and invite my moistures"

    This was the hook here.! I loved this the most. How you use your words I can't tell you! Blows my mind away.

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