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I Don't Understand!

I watch the tears fall
and can't help but wonder how
everyone watched it all
only to offer help to you now

They let the blood drip
forming puddles at your feet
On life you lose your grip
and the end you meet

They weren't there to see
how your walls crumbled in
they weren't there to be
your support for you then

They just watched from a distance
without offering their hand
but now they give assistance
I just don't understand

Why they're coming to late
why they are opening their eyes
In your suicide they participate
as they cut you with their lies

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  • ...emotional...

  • XXVampire-GirlXX
    February 5
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    do not revise

    Its perfect!!!! I really really like it!!!
    actually i like [love] it
    XXDeaths-GirlXX

  • scarredXXandrew
    February 5

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    amazing

    people pretend that they want to help you now but, you really needed help a very long time ago. and now the pain has made you who you are, nobody can help you, why waste the time with lies?