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my hushed soliloquy

delirium subdues
               
atrocious
                  dispositions

Author notes

insanity brings the best in me

A contest entry

Please comment with thought and diligence, your words will not discorage me so say what you feel need be said. Thankyou. =]

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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Comments

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    February 9, 2009
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    I actually like how well thought-out your four words were. Very impressive.


  • Lady Michaella
    February 6, 2009

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    oo. awesome use of vocabulary here
    excellent work. if i knew the meaning of those words.. i would comment more haha, but i dont

    best of luck in the contest!! I'm sure you;ll do great!
    -Lemon Bee-
    xx


  • Swangrnv gold member
    February 5, 2009

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    damn

    that's a hot four words, burn right into cranium!!
    i think u can expect a shiny lady!!


    • eating vertigo
      February 5, 2009
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      Mmm, prehaps.
      I'm not holding my breath.
      I've read the others works,
      I think at best I'll get green or bronze.

      I mostly enter contests because I find I write better pitted against others.

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