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Amber-Colored Eyes

It drizzle,
the land is drenched,
a surprised wrenched,
the heat started to sizzle

The tears,
it flows,
it never goes,
her fears

It drizzles,
her tears,
sadness and fears,
because of a fizzle

Eyes glimmer,
a rainbow,
it breezes a blow,
Ah! Eyes of a dreamer

Hands out, reaching,
she catch her breathe,
excitement, seethe,
she's daring.

Warm hands,
meet hers,
holding it tighter,
and they started to dance.

Eyes glimmer,
perfect,
expect,
it glows, amber...

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  • Adelaine
    March 6

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    This was well written. it has this rhythm...like a soft, sweet tune.

    Great piece!

    - Adelaine

  • Yes..this what the life is..you are so true and quite senstitively sketched the view..very well done..and thanks for sharing..