It drizzle,
the land is drenched,
a surprised wrenched,
the heat started to sizzle
The tears,
it flows,
it never goes,
her fears
It drizzles,
her tears,
sadness and fears,
because of a fizzle
Eyes glimmer,
a rainbow,
it breezes a blow,
Ah! Eyes of a dreamer
Hands out, reaching,
she catch her breathe,
excitement, seethe,
she's daring.
Warm hands,
meet hers,
holding it tighter,
and they started to dance.
Eyes glimmer,
perfect,
expect,
it glows, amber...
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Comments
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This was well written. it has this rhythm...like a soft, sweet tune.
Great piece!
- Adelaine

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Yes..this what the life is..you are so true and quite senstitively sketched the view..very well done..and thanks for sharing..




