Needles and bloody gore,
how about human meat?
STDs collected from whores
so tender from the beat.
Collected off the roadside
by a butchering cook
knife was applied
meat given no further look
Off into a stew
or a pie
maybe a gravy brew
or a human ribeye?
All the disease boiling down
into a tasty disguise,
a restaurant up town
with the best dinner buys
customers flood in
and sit to wine and dine
disease dripping off of chin
health begins to decline.
Author notes
Prompt was the title, Disease Flavour.
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great work with this poem. very intriguing nad full of emotion. I give yo a 15 for this poem. You've got a total of 48 points. Thanks for entering and bets of luck to you. kahy
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hummm this is kind of interesting. Kind of negative but I can really feel all those emotions that you are expressing very well. Thanks for sharing this with us.
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loved the imagery
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loved the imagery
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awesome!
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cant wait
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I finished it!
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