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With So Few Words to Say So Much, I Can't Even Begin to Describe How I'm Lost...

in your eyes
again...

A contest entry

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    March 27

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    Awww so short & heartwrenching.
    4 words? Oh well, nevermind. Only one word out.
    Very provocative here.


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    February 9
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    how lovely & simple


  • Lady Michaella
    February 6

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    ooo
    fantastic work. i love how the poem continues the title

    best of luck in the contest!! I'm sure you;ll do great!
    -Lemon Bee-
    xx


  • Kathraina silver member
    February 5
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    Fantastic write!

    ♥ Kathraina


  • Tqop
    February 5

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    Very beautiful. I absolutely loved it.
    It was different from what I expected to be in the contest. It was fresh new, original and I love how you connected the title to the poem. Very creative.

    Good job,
    Evemauy


  • michichoeret
    February 5
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    great

    very promising take


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    February 5
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    Nicely done.

    Good luck in the contest.

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