The wind blows with rage,
the leaves outside speak as if they know..
Did you come to free me from my cage,
or to drag me down below?
Your beautiful, pale skin reveals blackened veins,
your heart is but a stone within an empty grave.
I miss the way you used to tie me with chains,
but alas my name on your heart I cannot engrave.
You are beyond my reach and jet close enough to smell.
My lust grows stronger with every scent.
Am I somehow enchanted by a seductive spell?
Another night with you and I will have to repent..
To say I love you would be a horrid lie, but I cannot say I despise you.
If I could I would go away to die, if that meant I could be rid of you.
The blood I've spilt for you did no good, you're always inside me.
The doctors call it a skitsophrenic mood,
I oh so wish I could make them see.
But tonight you and I will run away from it all, no more white rooms or medication.
I was always afraid that I would fall, but finally I will spill enough blood and show you dedication.
Your heart I shall engrave tonight and I will prove I am no longer your slave.
It's always me, myself and I.
A contest entry
- Show us how odd you are! by Noir mariposa...x.
1750 points, ended March 17, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like this and the flow and such =)
I think that in some places the rhyme seems a bit forced but that's probably just me.
Thanks for entering,
I wish you the best of luck
Claire x -
I really, really like this...so much emotion and i can feel where you are coming from...my emotions are in it too...I'm so glad i inspire you to stay and continue to post...this site has allowed me to relieve so much pent up emotions and i'm grateful for it...thanks for commenting on my poem.
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Awe, I kind of feel like that now, I have a great relationship but im getting close to someone else, I havn't done anything wrong, but. It just kills me, if he was with anyone else. I sometimes think he's the perfect one for me, Ok not the same but almost. Ive felt like this before with my first love. I could never have him but he treated me like his for 4 years throughout my highschool life. I feel now it was a waste of my love and a waste of my time.
Great write.
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