breasts fed
the tortured child
misused
mutilation
wretched wound
of motherhood
never again drink milk
tainted by stars' torment
follow the cow
over the moon ...
or pour sour
from pipette
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Those children are hoping we will not be silent. Your message gives them a voice and hope. I wish you well in the contest.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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The darkness that you have penned here is so beautiful. I lve the power in all of your words. The flow here is smooth and hits to the core. Well, done !! Change or revise> not at all.
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Those well dressed, fine mannered individuals from elevated echelons of society are the scum of the earth that is responsible for general and personal agony in the ranks they merely theoretically bear responsibility for. In the US over 1 million children 'disappear' every year and no one seems to make a fuss about it, mainly because the white collar bastards who are involved in their disappearance silence the press and intimidate those who file complaints or investigate disappearances. Their international network of child abuse has been documented extensively and accurately and includes high office of administrations and departments of the UN and religious organizations that are deeply involved with these abominations. Society takes the blame for turning its head and persisting interest in worthless trivial matters. They may remain unpunished in the structures of this twisted world they control, but their rule will soon be over and they will be called to answer for their crimes. As will those who pretended not to know and thus gave the scum the permit to continue their criminal activities. I whish you the best of luck in the contest. Ack.
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Oh my! This made me cringe. I have never seen you write in this genre before and I am so very impressed with the power you have composed. You my friend are a born poet and being able to write about any subject, any emotion with this kind of passion proves it.
Love,
Amera♥
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