While I see you, as you are…
my eyes, skim across
the nakedness of every curve
reading brail thoughts,
written on walls of your
heart
and as I see you, the pale moon;
hopeful of stars
they wait beyond the mist,
that has yet to subside
come lay with me,
this night is still young
and I will sing to you,
love’s lullaby
Author notes
thoughts to a picture;
by Malabu
On Feb 5 9:47 AM
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i wrote, what came to me
this may not be what you expected...but i hope it's at least, memorable
A contest entry
- Through The Blinds - An Adult Contest by Dalaney.
975 points, ended February 9, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Contest Best Prewrites From February 2009 by amaranthine lover.
1125 points, ended March 12, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Sweetly romantic. A totally enjoyable read. Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck. It’s an honor to have you show your work here!
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Thank you very very much for your entry. Once again, you have swept my imagination away. Love, Lane
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This write is pure romance. I think some males on this site and in other places in the world could learn a thing or two from you Mally.
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this is so soft, so softly sensual and romantic at the same time... lovely!
~ Nicolette
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captavating
this is rather sweet. I made me want to cry, very sincere.
This is what got me....
reading brail thoughts,
written on walls of your
heart
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