Your razor sharp kiss cuts through my tongue,
I wish I could grab you and hug you just one more time,
Just to let you know that I really do care,
I will always be there.
I want to kiss your wrists so deep that you never see me the same way again,
You have bled my heart dry,
I am still crying inside,
While you cry outside,
Because bleeding hearts cry,
Bleeding hearts Dry out,
Bleeding hearts die,
They will find you out,
I want to hold you close,
Just to feel your heart beat,
Just to know,
That it beats for me,
And I miss you,
I wish you were still here.
Nothing anyone ever says or does,
Will change the fact that you are gone.
Nothing.
Author notes
Dedicated to Midnight. R.I.P.
Have you ever lost someone so important that you thought you would die?
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Oh my goodness, Yes I have felt that way!! !0Years ago My god_brother dissapeared outta my life fast because of suicide!!
This is a touching poem!!
My boyfriend now doesn't act like he did when I first feel in love with him..I wish he would touch me,look at me,hug/kiss me like he really gives a shit.. Its so hard wondering and guessing everyday if I wake up, or come home and he's gone forever!
"I want to hold you close, Just to feel your heart beat,Just to know,That it beats for me,And I miss you,I wish you were still here.Nothing anyone ever says or does,Will change the fact that you are gone.Nothing."
This part above, omg, it hit home so sad! And so true! Amazing pain and great choice of words used in this write!
*Kelsi*
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You have bled my heart dry,
I am still crying inside, <---- amazing lines.
Because bleeding hearts cry,
Bleeding hearts Dry out,
Bleeding hearts die,
They will find you out,<---love it
im sorry for what happened.
this is an amazing poem and i really loved it. -
yes i have, and im sorry for your lose.
I love the way you wrote this poem and i really loved it, it is beautiful and dark with a great purpose. Excellant piece of writing
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I have. This is beautiful, and it is dark...outstanding. Excellent job here. Excellent job.
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wow beautifully dark and amazing write
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as if it couldn't get better
i loved this write... my favorite line is "bleeding hearts die" i do believe they do die and i loved how you just bluntly came out and said it instead of beating around the bush with it..
great write
Ciara Ann
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Awesome
yeah i have, then it finally came to me that i never really had him in the first place to lose him. cause when you have someone it means they love u, and if they loved you they never would have left you.
but yeah i did feel like there was nothing to life for when losing him, so i understand you here.
it was a really good poem with an rhyme here and there, but the main thing is you expressed yourself amazingly.
so yeah awesome write XxX
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