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Breaking Dawn

Three AM and sleep hasn't found me
past the paned-glass barrier
the world grows gray, rippling
with precursing light, the sun has yet to show

 

silence reigns as the birds, trees, animals

all hold their breaths, anticipation

not quite night any longer

Four in the morning and I am still

 

waiting with the world outside

even the breeze stops to watch

the men who wrote of the  calm before the storm

never sat in waiting for dawn

 

Finally, the sun breaks free

the gray ties of predawn light

shatter, throwing orange streaks

piercing the silence with neon clouds

 

morning it is and sleep never found me

enjoying my coffee and listening past

the paned-glass portal in my kitchen

dawn has broken my midnight thoughts

 

 

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  • spirit rising
    February 8

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    this gives a really great description of what it feels like on those sleepless nights, very good usage of words too.
    a nice poem.