Toddler at ocean's seam:
how vast the voyage
to Blue Mountain bay.
Through stormy stream
your soul reaches tomorrow's dream
by glance.
Today's seagull dance
already in decay.
In a list
A contest entry
- Worth 1000 Words... Choose 28. by KyleBerg.
700 points, ended February 19, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I'm a bit embarrassed but I'm struggling to grasp the concept of this piece, though I can see without doubt that it is beautifully written and wonderfully poetic.
It contains beautifully created imagery and the subtle rhyming helps achieve a flawless rhythm and flow.
Thank you for entering
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I've always felt an attachment to the sea. Perhaps it is because I can see ocean through the child's eyes within me... with no preconception of how unimportant I am as part of the whole. Good luck in the contest.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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I think: time and space are manifestations of the same thing. We are divided; it is not.
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Wow. A very beautiful, poetic write. I sense a deep meaning in the words and the way they flow.
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Interesting, even thought I didn't understand it. lol. Points because i like the way it reads
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