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Some kind of wonderful

I don't know how it even started

Or where to begin

The only thing I do know

Is that my world was tossed

Upside down and it all started

With a two syllable word

All it took was "Hello"

And you had me

 

And from that day I've been

Amaze matter of a fact darling

I'm still amazed

You amaze me more and more

Every single day with each thing

you say and do

 

If only you knew the lasting

Impression it leaves on me

 

If only you knew about the

Chills you leave me with

With each touch, and kiss

 

If only you knew about

The butterflies I get deep

Within me everytime you

Say I love you or my name

 

If only you knew about the feeling

I have it's like I'm on top of
The world with you

 

If only you know how safe

I feel in you're arms

It's like I finally found the

Perfect spot that's made

Just for me

 

If only....

 

You would understand

That you truly are

Some kind of wonderful

 

 

 

 

 

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Title: "Some Kind Of Wonderful"

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  • hockeyplaya
    November 19
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    you'll always be safe in my arms babe

  • cirque du soleil
    March 1

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    If only you know how safe

    I feel in you're arms

    It's like I finally found the

    Perfect spot that's made

    Just for me

    lovely lovely line here!! You certainly have described your love for your guy wonderfully (no pun intended)

    I think the grammar was a bit off in the second stanza, second line, but other than that, this was one great read..it's good to appreciate what you have when you have it

    Thanks for the entry!


  • ckwriter69
    February 5

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    Good job of describing your emotions and love for your man. I always loved the song by this same title. Tnanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest.