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Be Mine

Be mine cause your fine

when we combine

that's a sign

mean that we shine

so lets go drink wine

but don't break your spine

or you will decline our designs

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  • She burns
    February 22
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    So sweet and loving here I love it, it's like a song too...


  • Violinstrings silver member
    February 14
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    better than before

    or you will decline our design
    not s at the end.
    good idea for change


  • Violinstrings silver member
    February 8

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    cause we have to design ,does not make sense
    end
    end with the first line again
    be mine cause your fine