O K sharks!
I’m wearing my
yellow waist-band,
so you’d better
make any move
in my direction
a very cautious one.
I don’t want you
messing with me.
Author notes
After see the photo:
"Let's Go Swimming!!" by Daniele Muscetta
A contest entry
- Worth 1000 Words... Choose 28. by KyleBerg.
700 points, ended February 19, 2009, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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hehehe, what a hilarious take on the prompt picture!
Such a cute idea you came up with -- I can imagine the boy's thoughts as he pictures himself charging through the water with sharks tripping over themselves to get out of his way =)
However, I can't help but wonder if you meant to say "cautious" rather than "cautionary" ?
Anyhow, thank you for entering my contest
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KyleBerg
Thankyou for proof-reading and for your very complimentary comments.
I greatly enjoyed the trip I had round some of my favourite places in Italy which I found in your profile.
I was there with Brit Army 1944/i946 and have re-visited many times since. Com’è bello questo paese!
Tanti auguri da Perth W A
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Oh, Italy is indeed a beautiful country!
The photos were from a school trip last November, it was such a fantastic experience... though, I fear I probably won't make it back there in the near future
Thank you for your reply, and thanks again for helping make the contest such a success
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