bumpercar dharma
bites my jugular vein
life is such a grueling habit
and motley collection of cliches
covered with mold on crinkled paper
i'm in a mode to gargle mineral deposits
so that some substance protects my innards
dislocated pepper patterns mock mundane mannerisms
and modes of expression never seem to propagate paydirt
Author notes
markgrif
A contest entry
- write. (invite only) by chilali.
600 points, ended March 6, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - POETRY PODCAST - Showcasing your work. by Thom Boulton.
700 points, ended April 1, 63 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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oh btw, i absolutely love that title. haha
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"life is such a grueling habit
and motley collection of cliches
covered with mold on crinkled paper"
^^ me like a lot. You rock Mark!
thanks for entering and good luck.
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wow... I am gonna bookmark this so that I can come back and read again!!!!
Juls
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Wow~
Oh My Word this is one Powerful piece You have penned and the title alone gets clappies
Excellent metaphors and the images just grab hard~ Holy Moly~
and *bumpercar dharma*
Wow~
and the presentation- Yep!!! Wow~
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Voice~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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a nice write good luck in the contestmaralisa
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very well crafted, especially the double consanence in the closing lines. Kudos and good luck in the contest.
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