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Sweet Redemption

Within my darkest hours I've always known
that love would not forsake me in the end.
With open heart and willing mind I've shown
to fits of dark despair I'll not descend.
So when I am mistreated or betrayed,
by any means a demon could think of,
I know that I am only being played
by one who's lost and frustrated in love.
I won't fix disappointments to my soul
or spend my time in bitterness to grieve.
Forgiveness is the song that makes us whole
through suff'ring we may learn best to believe.
Redemption is the sweetest thrill of all
a sense of peace so strong, it's worth the fall.





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  • 2lullabyhaven
    February 10
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    With your words here, I am feeling sheltered-thank you, sometimes words can heal...lots of love.


  • Ithica silver member
    February 8

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    What beautiful sentiments!!! And I must agree that life is too short to bear the disappointment of anothers shortcomings... Forgiveness is the only way we can be free to feel the full effect of a truer love!!! Bravo Alan, well said!!!


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    February 7

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    BRAVO.

    I am impressed and pleased.
    Thank you for meeting the deadline and all lmao.

    I shall be up on it next time.

    Love
    Passions


  • maa gold member
    February 6

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    a masterpiece ...
    maybe the best poem I have read from you so far ...
    while being profoundly personal and confessional, this verse is a precious life-lesson for us all ...
    thank you for sharing your wisdom,
    maa

  • siahaan
    February 5
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    aawww
    I like it

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