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Fire And Ice

I am fire, you are ice,
sizzling combination.
Lay upon the flame,
feel warm sensation.

Melt within my arms,
pressed against lips.
As flames rise higher,
warm your fingertips.

Ice slowly melt upon,
the flames you fan.
Stir desires for you,
come feel like a man.

Love me till embers,
bask in morning light.
Fire and ice together,
enjoy the tender night.


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  • penman gold member
    February 12, 2009
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    Excellent

    Very well expressed. Such great emotions shared. Thank you for sharing.


    • Sandygram silver member
      February 12, 2009
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      Thank you for the lovely comment. Hope you have a wonderful day. Take care, Sandy


  • Jesann gold member
    February 6, 2009

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    Oh very clever, love the way you portrayed and played on the differing personalities.
    Very well done, I enjoyed the read.


    • Sandygram silver member
      February 6, 2009
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      Thank You!!!!!!!!

      Thank you my friend. I appreciate your nice comment. Hugs and Smiles. You take care, Sandy

  • Bob Fox
    February 5, 2009
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    Poet

    a litte sizzle to your words. De-light-full to see.


    • Sandygram silver member
      February 6, 2009

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      Good Morning Bob

      So glad you stopped by and enjoyed my poem. Hugs and Smiles my friend. Take care, Sandy


  • LittleMoon silver member
    February 5, 2009

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    Lovely, I do like this. A really nice idea that two opposite personalities can blend together in a super combination. Sheila


    • Sandygram silver member
      February 5, 2009
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      Thank you Shelia, A lovely comment you have written. Thank you for stopping by and reading. Hugs, Sandy

  • SoulWhispher
    February 5, 2009

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    This is a most sensual poem that flows with hidden passion, you have written it with superb style and taste, I really enjoyed this poem, blessing with Love John


    • Sandygram silver member
      February 5, 2009
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      Hello John

      I appreciate your lovely comment. I am glad you enjoyed this one. Just popped in my head as I awoke and missed someone. Some never leave our hearts no matter how much time passes. Always a delight to have you read my poetry. Hugs and Smiles dear friend. Sandy


  • darlintlc silver member
    February 5, 2009
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    WOW!! Wouldn't we all love to have a "sizzling combination" like this!

    This poem is proof that opposites go together... Fire and Ice would be a good contest to have.

    "Ice slowly melt upon,
    the flames you fan."

    Loved this line!


    • Sandygram silver member
      February 5, 2009
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      What a wonderful comment. Thank you so much. I took your advice and started a contest about it. Thank you for reading. Take care, Sandy


      • darlintlc silver member
        February 7, 2009

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        You are very welcome! Hope the contest goes well... maybe I can come up with something but right now I seem to be on empty.

        Good luck!

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