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Life after death for the living...

Life after death, is it the same, ever again?
restless nights with constant pain.
tears fall much harder then heavy rain ...
My soul feels slain, and i rack my brain
so i can find my way back to my life that was sane. 
Then the skies fade to gray and  i know,
that life after death is NEVER the same, EVER again... 

                                to be continued. I'm writing this from my phone so... Later?

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