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~Call Of The Sea~

Missing image
The ocean glowed - as if lit from within,
confidence around his waist,

as dancing waves teased small frame
lapping encouragement...

he plunged in,
leaving the sugar white beach.

Author notes

"Let's Go Swimming!!" by Daniele Muscetta
http://flickr.com/photos/dani3l3/1008165317/in/set-72157594529190240/

BG made by my AP twin
TheRedCatJazzOfLove
Thanks hon

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  • Bruce silver member
    September 29

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    Awwwww.....this is lovely! Our children leave us, if we've prepared them, to venture out into the unknown on their life's adventure. Beautiful!


    • onesugar gold member
      September 29
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      No truer words said, that they do. My eldest are very independant.
      A pleasure to have you read, ypur comments are always valued and appreciated

      ~sugar~


  • Howard Manser gold member
    May 28
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    Cute!

    Nice flow, great choice of words. Thought at first it was a picture of you... Howard


  • KyleBerg gold member
    February 19

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    Oh, beautiful!

    Amazing imagery throughout, particularly (I thought) in the first and last line... "as if lit from within".. wonderful!

    And the metaphor of confidence around his waist... brilliant!

    Thank you for entering this superb piece,
    it is a pleasure to have it in my contest


    • onesugar gold member
      February 19
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      So glad you enjoyed, thank you for your fab comment
      valued and appreciated
      ~sugar~


  • Swtpoetryman
    February 7

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    ANOTHER WONDERFUL PIECE, BABY!

    Your well chosen 28 words fit this picture to a T and said it all, Honey! GOOD LUCK in the contest with this beautifully painted piece with brushstrokes from your heart and soul.
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.


    • onesugar gold member
      February 7
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      Thank you hon for your lovely comment
      as always a pleasure to have you read.
      Love you Chelle xxx

  • twodie4
    February 6

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    This is so sweet hon, makes me wish I was there
    Good luck sug
    All the best
    Emma


    • onesugar gold member
      February 7
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      Thanks Em, I am beginning to wish I was there myself
      ~sugar~


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    February 5

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    Aw delightful hun
    Sweet image and a lovely written poem
    I wish you all the best in the contest
    Julie


    • onesugar gold member
      February 7
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      Appreciate you reading and commenting
      A pleasure as always
      ~sugar~


  • Yorkshire kevin
    February 5
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    ah well done and you got your name in it to ,Sugar a very sweet write pardon the pun x


    • onesugar gold member
      February 7
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      Thank you YK value and appreciate you reading
      ~sugar~

      • Yorkshire kevin
        February 7
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        hello at this late hour for me lol normally pushing zzzzz as i get up around 4am strange sleeping pattern I HAVE, and hows you ?

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