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Broken Rose(Second version with chorus)

A broken moon hangs in the sky
It shines a dim light through the haze
Causing blurry visions so all the world can't see
An angel cries tonight
She sits alone and wonders why
Every time she tries
She is always brought down to her knees
And like a broken rose
Her petals scatter across the wind
Through another raging storm
She hangs on for dear life again

PRE CHORUS:
And she climbs in her cage
And she locks the door
She says its better to never hold on
Than to have to let go

CHORUS:
Baby ho-ld on I know.
The storms in this life will make you a broken rose.
But when its all said and done ohh your sun will shine
It will be alright, it will be just fine
Keep hanging o-n
You will heal from inside
And your rose will bloom again
It will be just fine

VERSE:
Her head falls in her hands
And then she cries and cries
She is breaking down again
Her heart it slowly dies
Her chest is tight and she can not breathe
What did she ever do to deserve this?
Will she ever mend her soul?
Will she ever love again?
Will the hard times leave her ?
Will she be free again?

PRE CHORUS:
And she climbs in her cage
And she locks the door
She says its better to never hold on
Than to have to let go

CHORUS:
Baby ho-ld on I know.
The storms in this life will make you a broken rose.
But when its all said and done ohh your sun will shine
It will be alright, it will be just fine
Keep hanging o-n
You will heal from inside
And your rose will bloom again
It will be just fine

It will be just fi-ne..........

And she lays alone in the dark, she fears
The light will never shine again

And she lays alone in the dark, she fears
The light will never shine again

It will be just fine

PRE CHORUS:
And she climbs in her cage
And she locks the door
She says its better to never hold on
Than to have to let go

CHORUS:
Baby ho-ld on I know.
The storms in this life will make you a broken rose.
But when its all said and done ohh your sun will shine
It will be alright, it will be just fine
Keep hanging o-n
You will heal from inside
And your rose will bloom again
It will be just fine


















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  • Pain in her eyes
    November 12
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    wowo

    i play guitar too


  • tidoubleguher
    November 9

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    Very nice song. I loved it, though I would advise changing the BG or the font color? Having purple on purple makes it difficult to read and this is a wonderful song, and deserves to be seen!!


  • DeathtoloveShade gold member
    February 11

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    I absoutely loved it

    The second Verse seem like your trying to give her hope. Yet for me hope died a long time ago great job. pen on poet s


  • forever ends now
    February 10
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    i loveeee ittt.


  • Dragonbabyx3
    February 5

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    Beautiful, It sounds like something I can relate too, So when you get your CD out I get a free signed copy right ? I can't wait until it's available!


  • Kari gold member
    February 5

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    I really enjoyed it and I like how the lines repeat itself drawing you into the beat of the music. I hope that you're able to get it out there.

    Kari

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