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ak

i find your smile to be an abrasion
measuring time by the amount of things we didn't do
no kiss

you didn't hold my hand

now you jerk away
it happens this way
morning stumbles on the wall
and i still can see the moon

unlike you

i smell the honey sweeter today
i've taken up my studies
worn failures like bones

i've broken you
you've broken me
sweet saliva hold me ill
for one more night

it pleases me
the way the geese have come home
they've found their pond
the way they left it

i've found my bed
the way you left it

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  • natari gold member
    February 6

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    I'm glad I'm, not dating right now or perhaps ever! It can suck the soul out of you. I think sometimes we think too much. I'm not going to give advice because you didn't write dear ann landers. I do want you to be happy though and enjoy life. Ok I'm done and here's a little insight into my night. I just ran out of milk. I have to bundle up and go get more. It will be the first time I've gone out all day. I'm such a homebody lately.

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  • autarky
    February 5
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    the ending kills

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    February 5

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    Does this mean that things aren't going as well as one had thought?


  • BlueNote27
    February 5

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    Nice. A little more hopeful than the last few. Let's hope that keeps up.