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Off the Ledge

Grind it down and breathe it in,
wipe the drool off of your chin.
Feel affliction, bite your tongue,
Feel emotion freeze your lungs.
your awake and your on edge,
foot is falling off the ledge.

But she hears you as you call her,
she runs to grab your hand,
they slip,and he falls with her,
"your wish is my command."

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