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Wisdom,Speak Again

Teach me how to fly
without wings;I want to defy
the rules of gravity
pushing away acts of depravity.
I want my body to be light
A ticket to the end of the world;an azygous flight.
Eyes watering in the draconian heights.
Teach me how to remain sane
the avaricious crowd;the constrain around.
Money speaks a different lingo
to the people who are bonded to it by fate
but the gate remains closed
for those;ill fate imposed.
Teach me how to remain still
the constant drill;the suffocation deep within.
Remove the fuss;remove the pain
all that needs to be left;be just humane...

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  • Namita
    April 9
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    "I want my body to be light" - I totally love that line! Good work!