Glistening pin-points gather;
soaking darkness in a zest pool -
enticing the fire skyward.
Lost memories play
and I swim forward,
mesmerized.
Author notes
21 words
Prompt: 'city lights'
Gosh I haven't writen like this in a long time...
A contest entry
- Anyone up for a morning quickie? #9 by chilali.
450 points, ended February 4, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Simply beautiful !!
Very well done.
Congrats on the HM.
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I absolutely adore the second stanza. Great word choice as well. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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ooo alaska. i have never been there before. i can imagine the gorgeous imagery while winter times especially northern light? nice write. good luck.
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simply beautiful.
i love the final stanza, and the last word is perfect.
wonderful take on the prompt!
best of luck in the contest
ElectricBloom
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this is so good!!!
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Beautiful words for this prompt!
I love where you took it. All the best
to you with this one!
Jeremy0826
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