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Summer Sunlight Fading

Slowly and silently
I contemplate today
So much turmoil
Though I don't let it sink in
I feel it on my skin
Smell it through my nose
Touch it with my fingers
But I don't let it in
Keep it away from the core
Hide it from myself
So as not to feel

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  • lindaburns gold member
    February 15

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    Again, “The Tomb Raider” comes to mind. A snippet. Things Laura has to do to stay focused. She has to KNOW the circumstances; be aware of what’s going on. For safety’s sake. Surely it makes the reader yearn for the “big picture”.