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Girl Interrupted

There you are on my door step,
damn boy your looking so good.
You flash me that little smirk,
as your telling my dad I'll be home by 10.
In your car wondering what is going on,
your hand is on my leg.
You said a movie,
but this is the way to your house.
Taking me by the hand,
i'm scared as we are heading to your room.
Sitting on your bed,
wondering what went wrong.
One minute so much fun,
next minute door swinging open.
Screaming and yelling words of hate,
you stand there saying I'm sorry baby.
She is looking at me,
yelling and screaming you little whore.
I have nothing to say but,
you interrupted at a bad time dear.

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# one (titles) i have never really wrote anything like this but oh well lol.

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  • Heroesrox
    February 4

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    Wow! It was really, really good, though! I liked it very much! Thanks so much! Would you please put in your AN, the option number, dear! Thanks againa and good luck to you!