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Please Do Not Water Fake Plant (Speed Limit: Infinity)



no dumping allowed,
yet humping abound
no ped-xing
but deer crossing
abound

no pets allowed
yet the submissant
was so tied to the Dom
no shoes, no shirt
no third eye, no no

don't want to see
how they steal
our consuming lives
hope you had fun
at the football game
--God

because while you fed
the true fed came along
shot some quarantine into its
pedestrianry in some neocon
predestiny as prehistoric
as dinosaurs crossing
fossil street
rewash rehash repeat
extra rehash--you know what i mean
i'm a smoking shiva angel shakti sheen

into oil boons' processing retreats
please do not water fake plant
lest it grow more than mere infant
of plasticine brain wash newspeak freak

and when the lights of the neon-lit stores
are missing litten letters we smitten smiles
"Buger King" is quite the bugger, I think I see
He's been sexing Dairy Queen
eating her big, ice cream thing
so it's no amazement, her ilk are borne
fast food brothers and sisters
ostensibly obese and offensively oblique
from a hamburger's reproductive glands
a chance mutation of the splice geneations
of chromosity harmonies
barney hugs and elmo tickles
still don't know how to get to Sensimilla Street
i loved feeding the Cookie Monster nookies
but big bird gave me a bigger bird down below
so I don't know, I just let love glow
and when the cannabis in my lawn grows
of it I mow, of it I mow

for ye shall reap what ye mow
and tend, and cure,
obscure, the eccentric, concentric

convalescent contestant
eats the bloody satiation
of his hunting impulses
in the horror show the
hallow hollow haunt
of the debutante surrogate sugar  
that licks lovely churning sweetly
in the honey of the be
koantum physics it's wu-wei
no tomorrow, no today
just infinity's gaze
merely grazing sheep
who i'll ardent to life
with my howling hands
the speed limit sign says
infinity, so divinity
i roar into speed
gnostic cannabliss

rapture rama rama

om shanti

Author notes

Only paid users can upload their own images, so I decided to just stick the image I used as my prompt here.

http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d153/mitchellgrantsmith/speedlimitinfinity.jpg

I don't even know if it exactly fits what the contest owner wanted. . .I'll wait to see what kind of feedback they give.

Whatever the case, I had fun. That's what counts on my end, at the very least.

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Comments


  • honey bear silver member
    February 5, 2009

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    it doesnt matter that you cant post a picture (but if you make enough comments in one day you can win a weeks free membership.)
    i did take a peek at the picture but it wasnt needed and yes it does fit in with the contest very nicely , thank you for entering this made me laugh although when i saw the length of it i thought it may be boring but not so, a fun write sure to make many smile. good luck in the contest