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How You Make Me Feel!

I can't take it anymore,
I wish I coukd just walk out the door.
I thaught you loved me,
But we just can't be.

You're always with her she's all you talk about,
You like her so much there is no doubt.
Together forever is what you once said,
But tears from my eyes will not be shed.

"Baby I love you" you used to say,
The first time you kissed me I remember that day.
It was heart-warming the feel of your lips,
I miss the way you used to hold my hips.

You say ypu're sorry, but forgive you I don't,
You say you'll change but I no you won't.
You say you love me but I know it's a lie,
You say you need me, but I say good-bye.

I thaught you were diffrent but I guess I was wrong,
I now laugh when I hear that song.
"You feel like a hero with me in your hands,"
I still hate the way you stare at her in band.

Forget it the whole "us" deal,
This pain is diffrent, it's just so real.
You broke my heart and tore it in two,
There just can't be a me and you.

In front of you I will not break,
The pain any longer I can not take.
You lie to me all the time,
I try to act as if i'm fine.

I can't take it any longer,
I wish passed pains made me stronger.
The tears the pain it hurts me bad,
I'm pretty sure it makes her glad.

If sadness killed I would be dead,
You try to talk but enough has been said.
I wish the pain would go away,
My feelings for you will always stay.

You called me pretty and made me feel nice,
But now it's diffrent i'm cold as ice.
I'm glad I met you but also not,
I feel so stupid I wanna get shot.

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I wrote this poem about my boyfriend "true about how it makes me feel"

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  • hopelessly-broken
    February 16

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    "You called me pretty and made me feel nice,
    But now it's diffrent i'm cold as ice."
    i liked that line and
    "If sadness killed I would be dead,
    You try to talk but enough has been said."

    well written, i liked the emotion you put in this piece. just one thing, i feel like it ended to suddenly. almost like when your reading a story and it just ends,but you feel as though your still half way through.
    but hey thats just my opinion =P
    apart from that a wonderful write!!

    boys!!!*shakes head*
    who needs em?

    lol

    luv HB
    xoxox