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Taste of Summer...

Sophisticated Sophocles
spent summer
soaking in saturnalian surroundings

Sipping
specially supplied
strawberry sorbets
simulating sumptuous sherbets

Perfectly prolonging
pleasurably palatable
produce

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  • Life is a Beach gold member
    February 8, 2009

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    This is an interesting alliterative poem! I like these and they are not all that easy to do either! And the pic of sorbet/sherbet looks yumalicious!


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    February 4, 2009

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    Oh wow Dan, can I have that cup PLEASE! LOL!
    Great job with this picture bro. I love the
    way that you bring your pictures to life with your words. Always a pleasure to read you!




    Jeremy0826


    • Celticpoet
      February 4, 2009
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      My humble thanks Jeremy

      I do appreciate your comments very much Jeremy...you are a highly regarded writer and your most welcome remarks illuminate my writes so well..regards Dan