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Snowed Down



It's so white, I can barely see
my mother wakes and tells me,
"Today schools off, Mr Hudson said,
do you want to stay in bed?"

"No!" I shriek as if she's mad,
I dress up warm and tightly clad.
"Be careful you don't slip now, hun!"
"Alright I will!" I shout back to Mum.

My friends outside giggle with glee,
as they chuck little snowballs at me.
"Lets build a snow woman!" I laugh out,
"No boys allowed, we can do without!"

Mum calls me in for lunch and I sigh,
can't wait for the meal pass me by.
Head back outside continue my lady,
with a little kity cat and beside her, baby.

I hope it snows again tomorrow, no school!
As to work with snow outside is just cruel.
I hope the snowstress is still upright,
when I go to bed and disappear out of sight.

Tomorrow I will make a snow boy,
to love the girl and bring her joy.
Me and my friends we love our play,
outside in snow instead of rain.

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snow & day off school.
I don't go to school anymore but did a few years ago...wish it snowed when I was in school so I could do this!

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  • Hope Angel silver member
    March 14

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    This is very cute and we enjoyed it
    thank you for entering

  • Judith Chandler
    February 6

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    "No boys allowed". Just snow boys to love the girl, lol.

    I don't think there's a kid alive who doesn't delight in those snow days. Sorry you didn't get any but you have written about it in a funny, imaginative way.


  • L.Jay
    February 4
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    this was such a cute poem!