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This time, This Place (Misused, Mistakes)

This time, this place
Bringing back memories that,
I've been pushing deep walling away
Behind miles of cement, and barbed wire
Because I've no desire
To think of them, or you again


Misused, mistakes
You've used me up, and run me dry
There are tears welling in my eyes
That I promised myself, refused to cry
Now you're telling me
It was all a misunderstanding, a mistake

You can tell it to me again, but I swear
This time I'm not listening
I've been running in cricles for too long

Around your bipolar tendancies 

Your rageful redunancy 

And I've had enough

 

Your pathetic excuses,

That you've learned your 'lesson'

But your remorse, I know

Will run amuck, run a course

Like a freight train, right over my heart

And this time, I won't let it tear me apart

 

Misused, Mistakes

You've been down this path before

And I won't join you again

This time, This place

My tolerance is wearing thin

Wearing through

 

I used to not know where to begin

...When it came to saying no,

To ending.. "This"

But now I do, I've no more

Room for you in my life

 

I'll cut out all the ugly parts, like

This time, This place Misused, Mistakes

 

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  • Thank you for your entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • StarValley
    March 24
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    mind blowing

    Man, I had no idea the pain, the hurt I can see what you're saying..Great job girl!


  • Ryan79
    February 4

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    Good poem. I can feel a lot of pain in it. Sorry about all the hurt that you went through. The emotions really flow through the poem.