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[ Dearest love I know ]

Dearest love I know
That breathing hurts
For you
That the air can't ever
Match the air that we once knew
Our hopes seem so far away
But we lay them at the feet
Of the world

Dearest love just please
Wake up today
And don't let them get you down
Because you know
That I'll always be around
Cause when we tell
The world goodbye
We will be laughing
In its face

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W00T 100th poem

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Comments

  • phillyhottpockets
    February 5, 2009
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    omg no spelling mistakes also a wonderful poem


  • MusicIsMyLifeline
    February 5, 2009

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    DAYYUUM.
    ahaha. good yet AGAIN for the 100TH time.
    jeeeeez. and this time no spelling mistakes! mymy XD