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Diamonds

Hope all stolen
Left in tatters
Gazing through
Your drawn Shutters:
But hope will grow
And hope will bend
Making sure
You meet again.
Unknown to minds
But feelings read
Everything
Will be Good again.

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This is for a dearly loved one, whom I betrayed but still loves me through all that

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  • angleof death
    February 17, 2009
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    this is a lame question but who is this about.


  • Whitefaeryofdeath
    February 15, 2009

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    It's an obvious guess of who this is about. You guys are almost the same person, twins can't say goodbye forever.

  • undying
    February 13, 2009

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    very nice

    nothing is EVER the last word not even death so there should always be room to hope that there is at least a reason to hope.


  • DiamondsStartAsCoal
    February 8, 2009
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