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S.O.S.

S.O.S.



S.O.S

I need you here now!

I'm trapped on the island of passion without you.

I've gathered the wood and set it in place

But the fuel that ignites the fire resides in your touch

And like the fuel I am engulfed in the flames of my infatuation for you.



S.O.S.

I need you here now!

As I sit on the deserted beach alone

And watch the tide caress the shore

I think of the way your love caresses me

And like the sand I am saturated with desire by the thought of your tide.



S.O.S.

I need you here now!

Lying down looking at the night sky gives me a tingle.

I see the way your eyes twinkle when you look at me.

And I feel as unworthy of your aura as the stars feel in the presence of the magnificent moon.



Just when I've given up hope of being rescued and have come to term with my demise, I see a big white ship near the shore and the captain is you! You've received my smoke signals and heard my tears. You came to be the knight of my salvation from this island and have made the Island of Passion true again!

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So when you're near me darling can't you hear me S.O.S! The love you gave me nothing else can save me S.O.S.! When you're gone how can I even try to go on. When you're gone though I try I cannot carry on!

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  • Sandygram
    March 7

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    I know the feeling well when we miss someone special. This was a delight to read this morning. You take care, Sandy


  • mzmikki
    February 20
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    So when you're near me darling can't you hear me S.O.S! The love you gave me nothing else can save me S.O.S.! When you're gone how can I even try to go on. When you're gone though I try I cannot carry on!


  • Rheea gold member
    February 10
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    you sweet romatic girl, you are making these pages burn.


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    February 4

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    Oh my...hon, I hope this man is paying attention! LOL!
    Because if he isn't, someone else may rescue you if he is not expedient.

    • mzmikki
      February 4
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      Silly Goose!

      Haha thanks for the comment. And for the record he did rescue me at the end it just took what seemed like forever! :-P


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    February 4
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    *Sees your SOS* Here I come to rescue you! lol
    I love this thought that you penned here. Very creative with some wodnerful imagery. I think that we have all felt like this at some point and time in our lives. Great work my friend and thanks a lot for sharing it here! Take care!




    Jeremy0826

    • mzmikki
      February 4

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      Ooooh!

      You better hurry and rescue me before he comes! Thanks for your comment and to be honest I don't think anyone has felt that much longing...

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