I sit at my computer typing messages to you,
Seeing the words which are formed in your mind,
The words you send and the emotions you hide,
Sent back to me in a jumbled mess while i cry.
The ways of love are hard and fast you must know,
Once you feel it for one then surely another must go,
Hate the same as you love with whispered words,
Sent to the fates and gods who sit and reign above.
Have you really considered the position you're in,
Will you sacrifice me in order to pleasure a Djinn?
Your self respect and all that you are will fade away,
Because all that girls wants is your life to decay.
Yet knowing this i willing submit to your will,
I bend and fold myself to please you my master,
Knowing that probably it'll end with my heart broken,
My sacrifice is willing though the words are unspoken.
Please tell me what you think
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this poem is self explainatory so I would suggest you lose the authors notes.
you shouldnt need to explain your poems.
other than that, this is nice.
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Thank you for your kind comment i have follwed your advice
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