I see shadows coming closer
closer and closer.
They follow me everywhere
but always i do not bear
Fearing,fearing is all I do when
I see the shadow .
At night I sleep,but it comes
near and I don't know what to do
Scared,scared is all I am when I see
it coming.But when I find it you will
see how frightened I am.
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This piece was dark but it was full of imagaery and it was very enjoyable to read. Short and not long! Short poems tend to get my attention better. Thanks for entering and best of luck to you in the contest.
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This dark but a bit odd. You repeated the same idea over and over. You could have elaborated or made this repetition by using a different set of words, making me feel this fear, not just reading about it.
You chose option 6? If so, which poem inspired you?
Thank you for entering my contest, keep on writing and good luck.
If you edit or can answer my question please IM me or reply to my comment.
Nooni
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Option 6
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really good write, dark, short good imagery and the words flowed very nicely good luck in the contest you are very talented! keep writing!!
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RULES RULES RULES
Dear Poet,
Thank you for entering my contest I SIT and I ROCK and I WAIT...
with you submission SHADOWS>
Please return to the Rules of this contest. There you will see that something must be placed in AUTHOR's NOTES.
If and when you'd like to comply, please let me know that you've done so; for until that time I will not read your entry.
Once you follow the rules, advise and then I'll be pleased to read your entry.
Best wishes,
Liquid -
I found this quite vague and thought that you could have elaborated more. You've formed a nice base and all you have to do now is to build on it. Overall, a good piece, but like i've said, needs more elaboration. Keep writing ya, cheers!!
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A chilling poem, and I love the unique layout
Well done and good luck!!
Maria
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booted
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Chilling... haunting... amazing!
s.sora -
tututy
htut -
Good poem!
great poem
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Good poem!
this is fantastic -
Odd form, but I quite like it. Thanks for entering!
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Best of yours so far
I loved this one more than any of the others i read from you it has great imagery and flow! Good Job!
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thanks for entering, this was definately different.
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It was not Junoon. but i have bookmarked it and I will come back at your piece to comment is fully
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This is not a gold winner in a mystic storm contest and neither was the other prewrite you entered, I have removed it as well from this contest. To qualify for this contest you must enter a prewrite that has been a previous gold trophy winner in one of Mystic Storms contest. That qualifies you to enter a fresh write... it is the fresh write that will actually compete in the contest. ( you will be entering two poems, the first is the gold trophy winner and the second is the fresh write dedicated to Mystic... I hope that better explains the rules and I apologize if I did not make them clear enough)
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this is... odd. i dont know what to think of it.
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this is great
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