My being inhabits
the synergism of creation,
as a magnetic force of
unfathomable possibilities.
I inter-relate and
connect with the consciousness
of all things virtuous.
Extracting light from light
within the shadows of obscurity.
To engage humanities skewed
perception of self,
toward the enlightenment
of spiritual awareness.
Time being the main benefactor
of progression,
toward the healing of souls.
As an agent of love
predestined by His will,
to fight the good fight of faith,
faithfully to the end.
Author notes
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for poem inspiration.
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2435901
Comments
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Musing My Belief
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and after reading several times~ I am Honored also Humbled You took the time to pen for my contest You took the prompt and ran with it~ Bravo!!
When I digest words written, images come through that grab hard~ I have to say- when I read Your words~
To engage humanities skewed
perception of self,
toward the enlightenment
of spiritual awareness.f
Oh My- when I read Your verse- I was intriqued at the level of calm energy that came through~ It felt like there was a very tranquil-peaceful quill- dipped in ink and then these words written- I have to say this- You have one Gentle energy~ as if not easily shaken- I felt this ...sigh- as in I am here and it is all good
for some reason have word: metaphysical - bombard my Mind- in relation
~ Love the direction You took this prompt Hopefully my words make some sense Powerful verse and message You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled-
As an agent of love
predestined by His will,
to fight the good fight of faith,
faithfully to the end.
Beautiful Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit
also best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
with much love and light~ Desire~*~
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This is lovely, with excellent uses of imagery and device. I didn't even have to look at the picture to understand the poem, and you've got diction down to a science
I liked this line:
"the synergism of creation"...
It embodies the scope of your entire piece. The sentiment is there, and synergy is key to making your reader feel like s/he is IN your poem, not just reading it; for these few moments, I breathed the same air as you, and you had my undivided attention.
Well done, and keep up the good work, my friend
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maybe you'll reap a blessing for this poem, a wonderful write.
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Time being the main benefactor
of progression,
toward the healing of souls.
Let's hope so.
Beautiful.
Love,
jin
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