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Why to fight

If we do not fight
We will lose all right.
In a world
where peace is old.

 

We fight for power.
and in our dieing hour
the phoenix will take flight
and begin again will the fight

Author notes

i wrote this and some more shorts in study hall most are 4 lines XD

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  • Content
    February 5
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    ooo nice. and post those shorts. most of my poems dont exeed 10 lines


    • poetcide
      February 5
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      Well they need end lines but i can't think of any for them, they all very in subject too