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Power of Peace

Peace will set them free
but then who will there be.
No reason to drop the bombs
No children without their moms.

When we find peace
The weapons will cease.
The nuclear winter will freeze.
The governments will bow on their knees.

Peace will reveal
What our hearts conceal.

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just thought this one up switching between classes

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    February 5
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    damn this like beautiful. i thought of like half my poems in class