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Sunrise

Come celebrate with me today,

And sing like n’er before.

Come run and jump and play our games,

Then do it all once more.

For I have lived this life of mine,

And you have lived yours too.

Together time is left behind

When I am here with you.

A precious jewel and treasure be,

As you have always been.

Well born to be the special-est

By beauty from within.

Your name rings out and joy wells up,

And fam’ly ties surround,

Related by the love we share,

And feelings so profound.

So celebrate today with me,

And share what we can share.

Hold on to things that life provides,

From angels unaware.

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  • MorbidGarden
    March 14

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    this was very, very beautiful...i love the background and the font as well...

    words cannot express...well, perhaps they can but they won't be as wonderful as yours!

    great job!


  • suseann
    February 5

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    I'd thought this was from a Grandfather speaking to his Grandson or Granddaughter maybe. Lovely living in the moment perspective .


  • Winged Unicorn
    February 5

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    Beautiful

    I'm not really sure what there is to say. It's beautifull written the imagery makes me see your words and the background is beautiful. Absolutley perfect : )


  • Gagiikwe
    February 5

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    Indeed, a good bit of play should by rights be repeated! Especially when our playmate has come to us as an angel unaware. They are the special-est.


  • Shy Little Lamb gold member
    February 5

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    very nice

    absolutly wonderful flow of words, rour poem is so wonderful. I like the way you say come celebrate me, sing jump and play games. Very lovly.

  • So amazingly beautiful Paul. Your writing is always so full of emotion and it is certainly palpable in this.
    Thank you for sharing your talent!
    Gaylene

  • piccola silver member
    February 5

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    Funny, I was doing things to my page which includes adding special poems from special people and you came easily to mind. (our little secret lol) this is a wonderful poem. It brings a smile to the lips and does indeed brighten the day. I love the amazing rhyme. Good job


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    February 4
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    What a beautiful poem from a big, beautiful heart.


  • Arrianna MacEwan
    February 4

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    This is so amazingly beautiful!!!! this will be a "special-est" favoritest poem of mine from here on out


  • Hillview
    February 4

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    Simple but interestingly captivating. You hold your readership and there is relevance as well as continuity and harmony in your write. I love these lines:

    "Together time is left behind...
    By beauty from within."

  • Ptm
    February 4
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    Amazing

    I especially liked the background that went with it, good coice!


  • Ishtar
    February 4
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    btw, you're specialesterest
    Ok?


  • Ishtar
    February 4

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    Stupid words couldn't describe how much I appreciate you.

    GD, Reens. <3


  • Veronica Leigh
    February 4
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    awww! Is this for Kathy??

  • Enchanting masterpiece.


  • Peteskid gold member
    February 4
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    simply beautiful...PK

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