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Lifes Game

The game of life
You move the pieces
Then you make a left or a right.
But sooner or later you lose
And one less player for the game
It will go on and on until
All the players are gone
And you lost the game

Are you in the same boat?

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  • Emoforever
    June 2
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    i realy dont know,but its a good poem lol.


  • MasterFoxFang
    April 2

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    Simple

    you took a simple rhyme and simple idea and made it into this great write the only thing i would change is this part

    left or a right
    i would take out the uh a to make it flow better


  • Quietgirl17
    February 20

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    Hmm this is good. It makes you wonder if it is true. Great write!!!